tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27703934.post8863413221683041623..comments2023-08-17T00:44:15.251-07:00Comments on Overheard in PDX: Jigsaw Falling Into PlaceRichhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02103258755857077795noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-27703934.post-57121691932539064712008-08-16T14:31:00.000-07:002008-08-16T14:31:00.000-07:00Keep working on it. Right now it's too cheesy and ...Keep working on it. Right now it's too cheesy and lacks any depth or nuance.<BR/><BR/>For example, this is totally unbelievable dialogue:<BR/><BR/>"CALEB <BR/>A vessel, you say? <BR/>SHO <BR/>Yes, my boy. The ancients believed <BR/>that the lodestone carries a soul."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com