Sunday, May 07, 2006

Like Film Noir in Real Life

Man: "I'm sorry. Did you say something?"

Woman: “You’re watching someone else in this room. Is it the girl in the corner?”

- Fruition coffee shop

-- Submitted by Rich.

This small fragment of their conversation intrigued me so much, I based a short story on it.

1 comment:

Lex DeNovo said...

I'm not sure I "get" it, but I like it. You know, there used to be a website that I'd visit, which was dedicated to short stories. They had to be exactly 357 words. This was before blogs are what they are. I wrote a couple, but the guy was having server problems, couldn't keep his site up, and eventually moved to Canada. True story. But 294 words short.

Lex DeNovo